The Singer's Dance breath markings. 

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bar 8: breathe on beat 3

bar 14: quick breath on the and of 1 (after 'garden')

bar 15: breathe on the and of beat2 (after 'trees')

bar 20: breathe on the and of beat 2 (but we shouldn't feel a big break in the line at that point)

bar 28:sopranos put the 's' of clouds on the last 8th of the bar, and grab a quick breath

altos: put your 's' on the last 8th as well, to match the sops.

bar 30: tenors: breathe after 'comets' (on the last 8th of the bar)

bar 32: sops breathe on the and of beat 2 (after 'ocean')

tenors DO NOT breathe after 'ocean'. This is a change

altos: DO NOT breathe after 'ocean' -- breathe after 'air' in bar 33 instead

bar 34: tenors: take away the tied D on beat one and breathe there

basses: if you need a breath, take one on the and of beat 1 (after 'air')

bar 36: everyone places the 's' of 'cries' on the and of beat 2 and takes a discreet breath

bar 38: everyone takes a breath on the and of 2 (after 'flocking')

bar 40: take the breath together as indicated in the score

bar 41: tenors and altos 1s breathe on the and of 2 (after 'like')

bars 43 & 44: tenors do not breathe. In bar 45, put the 'c' of 'once' on the and of 2  and take a solid breath to get through the rest of the phrase

bar 50: sopranos breathe after 'erupt' (not 'erupts' -- the 's' is a typo). No breath in bar 52, as written

bar 54: everyone breathes on beat 3, after 'hill' 

bar 56: soprano, alto, and bass breathe after 'hill'. Tenors do not 

bar 58: sopranos breathe on beat 3 (after 'hill'); tenors and basses breathe on the last 8th of the bar. 

bar 60: all breathe together discreetly on the and of 2 (after 'hill') 

bar 64: soprano 2s and altos breathe on the and of 2 (after 'dance'); tenors and basses breathe on the last 8th of the bar 

bar 66: altos breathe on the last 8th of the bar (after 'know')

tenors breathe on the last 8th of the bar (after 'helplessly') 

bar 68: sopranos 2s and basses breathe on the and of 2 (after 'singing'); altos and tenors do not 

bar 70: tenors breathe on the and of beat 1 (after 'seeking')

altos breathe on the and of beat 2 (after 'seeking') 

bar 72: everyone except sop 1s breathe together on the and of beat 2 (after 'us') 

bar 74: everyone breathes together on the and of beat 2 (after 'stop') 

bar 76: everyone takes a breath together, as indicated in the score 

bar 81 & 82: soprano 1s breathe as indicated

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